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Greatest Prize Chapter One - Fiolee

Fionna's POV

     I got rejected. Again.
     I try to hold in the tears but instead I begin to choke on the aching burn
I feel within the back of my throat.
     I, Fionna, the 17 year old brave human girl, turn my back on Prince Gumball and start heading towards the royal candy door. PG apologizes, but I'm too afraid to reply a simple "It's okay," knowing that if even the slightest weep or sniffle escapes me, the tiny sound would become audible as it would echo throughout the high ceiling room.
     I should have known that he would reject me. He doesn't know how much his words emotionally scar me. No one knows. The prince just merely thinks that when I ask him to go out somewhere with me, that it would just be a pal kind of thing, to hang out, but it's not. Either way, my heart ends up a mushy, sappy mess.
     As soon as the castle door closes behind me, I finally let one tear run down my left cheek. I keep my arms crossed and I push against my lower chest to relieve the pain I feel trying to escape from inside of me. I can't show any sign of weakness in public. I immediately hide my face from anyone's view along the way and begin to walk toward the tree fort. I'll just sit there and possibly mope for awhile.
     I am sick and tired of feeling the same way every single time Prince Gumball hurts me. I should know better than to let him break my heart time after time, and I should have learned by now. It's been 5 years since I first loved Gumball, and I'm done giving him a world of chances. Sure, it was reasonable at the start since I was just a kid and he claimed it was inappropriate. The thing is, I've grown over the years. I'm not that immature little human girl who runs around in the dirt all day anymore.            
     Now, I know that PG didn't like me not because of my age, but because of who I am. He still doesn't have certain feelings for me, and I know he never will.
     Suck it up, Fionna. You're stronger than this.
     I take a deep breath, and close my eyes for a moment to stop the tears. Once my breathing slows down to its normal and calm pace, I continue walking home.
     I simply turn the knob and walk right into the tree fort. It's dark and feels empty, so I turn on the light, only to see the same furniture Cake and I have had since we moved in years ago. Speaking of Cake, she left two days ago to attend alongside Lord Monochromicorn to his family reunion. She won't return for probably a month, but having them spend time together is fine by me, since, well, Cake's
pregnant and all and LoChro is the daddy.
     Just thinking of Lord Monochromicorn reminds me of Prince Gumball and brings me back to the ache in my throat.
     I'm heartbroken, and all these words begin to spill out of me out of pain. I grab my personal journal I hide under my mattress, and I begin to write everything on my mind. I think about all of the injuries I've received, all from saving Gumball's butt. I wrote how I would promise never to fall for him again, without knowing if he's ready to catch me. I flipped back to the first page I wrote in my journal. Of course, it was about how I thought Gumball was cute, but that was when I was 12. I ripped the page out of my book, crumpled up the piece of paper, and threw it across the room. I wrapped a blanket around me and I sat at the side of my bed.
     I grab the bass that Marshall Lee gave me for my 14th birthday, and he taught me how to play. I fiddle with the strings, but then some chords fill the quiet room. I look at all the things I've wrote in my journal for the day, since I didn't really think about it. I just .. wrote. I'm humming as I play, and I find myself singing what I'm reading out loud instead. I decide to continue this songwriting madness for the heck of it. I've got nothing else to do, and it's already getting dark.

Marshall Lee's POV

     Laying around in my cave all day is unbelievably boring. Waiting until the sun sets is pretty lame, but I guess it's better than having to walk around with a stupid umbrella that has holes in it. Fi and I were supposed to have a jam session right now at my place, but she hasn't come. I called her just awhile ago, but she didn't answer. Lump. It's about 7 at night, so I decide to just go to her house if she won't come. I grab my axe bass and start to fly off.
     I arrive at little Fi-Fi's house sooner than I thought, and just as I was about to randomly enter the front door uninvited, I hear a bass chord being strum in a pretty amateur way. I can immediately tell Fi's jamming without me. The girl's pretty terrible when it comes to playing bass, but she's a work in progress.
     I float up to her bedroom window and I spot her just sitting there. She's completely oblivious to the chuckles that come out of me when she struggles putting her tiny fingers on the right strings, but then I realize that she's working on a song. I turn myself invisible, and I squeeze through the window, trying to not make a sound. I sit in front of her while she sings some junk. God, her voice is beautiful. The last time I've heard her sing was when she was trying to gather the cat, me, and Prince DumButt together to get our missing stuff back. That was when she was 13, though. 4 years later, I'm surprised.

Fionna's POV

"I've been bruised and I've been broken
Can't believe that I have put up with all this pain
I've been used and I was choking on the promise
I would never fall again

And I am done with your twisted symphony
The words that had me sound like stolen poetry
I tore the pages and I can finally breathe

'Cause all I want is everything you're not
So go ahead and slam the door
'Cause you can't shut me out
And no I don't, I don't care what you say
'Cause all I really, all I really want
Is everything you're not."


     I strum the bass a final time. It's not perfect, it's not complete, but it made me feel better and over Gumball. To top it all off, I'm a pretty sucky bass player, too. I close my eyes for 5 seconds to catch my breath, and once I open them, I see Marshall Lee.
     MARSHALL LEE?!
     "What the stuff?!" I shriek and jump a little, and I blink twice to make sure he's real and I'm not imagining things.
     He laughs at my sudden reaction, and I blush from embarrassment. I punch him on the shoulder, but he continues to laugh. I settle down and cross my arms, shooting him a glare.
     He apparently calms down too as he stops laughing. "You didn't come for our sesh so I just came here. Oh, and by the way, you need more bass lessons."
     Reality hit me, and I realized what he could have seen. "How long have you been here?"
     "Long enough to know you're pissed at something."
     "Ugh. Lump off, Marshy." I push my palm against his face and he grabs a hold of my wrist.
     "Okay, first of all, don't call me Marshy. Second, it's about prissy pink-faced Princess Bubba Gumball, isn't it."
     My eyes widen at his correct answer. "W-whaat? Noo. Let go of me, and I'm not pissed!"
     "Yeah, you are."
     I roll my eyes, and I shout back at him, "Okay, I'm pissed! At you! Now lump off!" I jerk my arm away from his grasp, but mostly it feels as if he let go himself.
     After a moment of silence, he gains the guts to break it. "That song you wrote," he begins. "It was pretty BA if you ask me."
     I hesitate and I take a moment to think. Did Marshall Lee really just compliment me? "Err, th-thanks. It's not exactly a masterpiece or anything."
     "No, it's great." he assures me. I nod and give him a slight smile to show my true appreciation. Once I turn my back on Marshall to go to the bathroom real quick and wash my face, he says something faintly that I couldn't exactly make
out before he starts talking again.
     "W-wait," he stutters and I hear him inhale deeply and exhale. "F-Fionna, would you like to go on a date with me sometime?"
:icondonotgogentlegabby:
This is my first fanfiction ever :D
Of course it's Fiolee lol(x
Poor Fi.
Yes, she's 17, knows how to play bass a little, but only a few chords.
Cake is gone, and she probably won't be in this story for a while.

I didn't bother to proofread it or anything, so you can point them out if you want, I guess. No one's stopping you.
Fi has matured, and is still that tough, fun, strong adventuress on the outside. But deep down, she and has a very emotional and sensitive teenage girl mind.
It's not that interesting I know, I know >__<!
I decided to write this because school's coming up and I needed practice on my writing skills before hand.

If you all think Fionna overreacted to Gumball's rejection, I don't know .. she's been giving him an awful lot of chances and now the age difference isn't an obstacle now that she's 17. and he STILL doesn't like her. It's teenage stuff, you know?
The song Fionna wrote is titled "Everything You're Not" by Demi Lovato. I figured it would be perfect since, well, Fionna doesn't want someone she has to rescue all day every day and she doesn't want someone who won't notice her. She wants someone everything he's not. *Cough cough (;
"Everything You're Not" : [link]
I was debating between this song and another song but I figured to just use this one. The other song will be during another moment :3 Plus, Fi was going all TEEENAAGGEE RAAAAGGGEEEE on her journal so it should sound all .. rage-filled and sad. Did that make sense? No? Oh well lol. :icondontkillmeplz:

I could continue this, if I get enough requests. I look forward to it, though!(: I have everything planned out and all.
:icongivemesmilesplz:
Again, first fanfiction, I'm not too good at this.
Thanks for reading!(: :icongreatjobplz:
Comment please :D

Chapter Two: [link]

~DoNotGoGentleGabby (:
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~caseyXtheXcat May 2, 2013  New member
*reading the end* :trollface: heheh
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~kitkatKMH26 Apr 20, 2013  New member
EEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yeah, that's right Marshall, get your gurl. (;
Loved the Teenage Rage moment btw xD
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~KATKATROCKS Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
it doesint
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~KATKATROCKS Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
gonna see if this one works :iconunbearablerageplz: i'm hoping yay! or :iconultimaterageplz:
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~KATKATROCKS Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
gonna see if theis icon works. :iconultimaterageplz: this is either; yay iy works!, or dangit
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~Echoawesome Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
That pink butted idiot he is just a spolied brat and if i could ever meet him i would first hurt him badly until someone like fionna pulled me back then eat ice cream doc
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~KATKATROCKS Feb 9, 2013  Student Writer
who dont you just threathen to eat him? :iconcannibalplz:
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~Echoawesome Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
ice cream is good
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~KATKATROCKS Feb 11, 2013  Student Writer
then threathen to eat him with ice cream. HES MADE OF GUM MAN!
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