Want A Strawberry? Fiolee (:

My very first drawing of Fiolee :3
No romantic tension going on apparently, just some talking and walking around at night so Marshall doesnt burn his bloopin' face off lol.
I was just doodling in the middle of the night and I ended up drawing these two lol. I'm not very good, considering this is my first and all, but eh. I'd appreciate some comments on what I should improve? (:

I got the idea for this thing from two cool stuff
Marshall says what is similar to what Finnick Odair from The Hunger Games: Catching Fire when he had been offering sugar cubes to Katniss when they first met.
"Want a sugar cube? They're supposed to be for the horses, but who cares? They've got years to eat sugar, whereas you and I . . . well, if we see something sweet we better grab it quick."
If you don't like the Hunger Games Trilogy, well, that's your opinion. But I know you like Fiolee :3 So here!
For the people who haven't read or heard of the Hunger Games Triolgy, GO READ IT NOW!(X

and if you don't understand what "you know what" is, I got the idea from this really really cool animation that is so sad [link]

If you can't read my junk I can my handwriting, here's the dialogue.
Marshall: YO FI! Want a strawberry? I keep some around with me, but I don't care. I've got way too many years to suck the red from junk, whereas you.. Well, if you see something sweet, you better grab it quick.
Fionna: Sure, Marsh, I'll take one. But don't worry about "you know what." I'll always be here for you, Marshall Lee! Don't forget that.

I just realized people might be like "Where's Marshall's right arm?" or something. Yeah his arm is chilling behind his back. You cant see it due to the way he's tilted (:
Oh and the line in between, as I said, I was doodling, and it happened to be on two orange sticky notes. The color scheme is a bit off for the both of them, because of the orange base. And plus I don't have any right tools to color, everything used on here was just mechanical pencil, a few colored pencils, and like a bunch of colored pens I have. You can tell, with all the uncolored spots right there

KThanksForViewingMyPieceOfPoop! Bye Loves <3